I like this. Succinct, straightforward, and a great connection with the photo. We might like something like this at PP&P. Regards, Dave.
Oh, thank you Dave – I’m pleased you like it!
I’ve read the poems down to here and I had to comment on this one because it’s really nice the -ing -ing -ing two syllable words, and then the simplicity of ‘bread’. Such an important word too – something that has kept mankind fed for centuries!
Aw, thank you – yes, that’s a good point – I hadn’t thought about the fact that bread has been such an important food for such a long time!…
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